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Hook Line Thinker

I was reeled in Not knowing if I was Swimming...or broken I swallowed your line Starving for what you fed me Dumbstruck and wounded There was no fight, No chance that I would not Succumb to your lures Maybe here was my chance To witness saviour But now I see You have chosen To fillet and release My heart. And there's plenty more fish in the sea. For those like you. © 2013 Ruby Honeytip

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Date: 3/11/2013 4:05:00 PM
wow, another very good poem from you. I love how you carefully choose your titles too. Word play is so fun. Extended metaphors are some of my favorite types of poetry to read.
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