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Hook Line and Sinker

HOOK LINE AND SINKER left right and centre trees crowd highways like gawkers at a police barrier arms wave unsteadily narrowing the light abstraction makes me ill hook line and sinker hunched down shut eyes tight with fright greens sway on and on until they stop dead still left right and centre a year streaked with sunny weathers acre upon acre of fields reaching within souls fill hook line and sinker prehistoric thinker steering gripping knuckles tight white falling apart with a fresh lost will © Kim van Breda—10 September 2015

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Date: 9/11/2015 10:35:00 AM
It's been awhile. :) This was MASSIVE! Say no to those "prehistoric thinkers".
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Poet Tacito
Date: 9/11/2015 11:17:00 AM
Yes, I'm still here in Cali. :) Super excited to reconnect w/you again! I hope you & the family are doing great!
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Kim Van Breda
Date: 9/11/2015 10:52:00 AM
Drake !!! Hi... Thank you... it has been too long.. where have you been? You still residing in that beautiful State of California? You still writing your epic poetry...? Will go visit and check out what I've been missing :) ~~X~~

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