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Honeysuckle

Holding on with slender vines that gracefully twine the fence. Ornately draping fragrant blooms, the hummingbirds like best. 'Neath, in your shade, the rabbits rest in the noontime sun. Evening breezes bring your calming scent across the lawn. Your tender shoots reach out, like a child's hand that wants to be held. Spring awakens you to help welcome my Roses near the well. Unlike any other blooms, so dainty and delicate. Creating a yellow, orange and pink upon green, sweet blanket. Kindly, I snip and try to train you to stay in one place, Lucky for me, you forgive this invasive disgrace. Elegance is your nature, while tenacity is your strength. For Carol Brown's contest: Flowers Of Spring Placement:3rd

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Date: 5/2/2011 8:42:00 AM
A fine, descriptive write. I love the subtle use of assonance, rather than straight rhyme, in most of this poem!
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Date: 4/20/2011 11:11:00 AM
Ahhhhh. Exactly as it is. I have once that climbs up the side of my house - I love it and this is a sensational Acrostic. Many congrats on your SENSATIONA WIN!, Paula. Lainie
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Date: 4/20/2011 7:54:00 AM
Lovely, Paula. Especially like the way you describe the shoots reaching out "like a child's hand..." Congratulations on your win in Carol's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/20/2011 7:37:00 AM
Congrats Paula on your 3rd place win in the contest. beautifully worded and fine expressions on this pretty flower..Love,Gautami
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Date: 4/20/2011 7:35:00 AM
Many congrats on your big win, Paula : )
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Date: 4/20/2011 5:26:00 AM
Oh my here is my number one, I do so love those invasive vines, wisteria too I believe, an bittersweet, they just are so beautiful everything else almost dies from their beauty. Congrad's on this splendid write winning. Light & love
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Date: 4/19/2011 8:55:00 PM
beautiful Paula. Super congratulations all the way.
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Date: 4/19/2011 6:07:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of carol, Paula
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Date: 4/19/2011 2:23:00 PM
Congrats on a well deserved win, Paula. Awesome piece. Enjoyed. Happy Easter. xxxRalph
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Date: 4/19/2011 1:35:00 PM
Congratulations Paula. A lovely poem on your favorite flower.
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Date: 4/19/2011 12:56:00 PM
Congrats Paula on your wonderful winning poem in Carol's contest with this vibrant beauty my friend.. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 4/19/2011 12:44:00 PM
Congratulations Paula on your winning placement in my Flowers of Spring contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/18/2011 8:36:00 AM
Nicely done Paula. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for my 4th place in your contest. It was one of the most interesting and challenging contests that we have had. Joyce
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Date: 4/18/2011 6:47:00 AM
Thanks, Paula : ) Your contest was great fun - and I love the new form you created. What a pity your lottery ticket wasn't the winner LOL. I love the vivid imagery in this poem - beautiful
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Date: 4/14/2011 5:25:00 PM
Paula, kashinath referred me to this poem of yours. I can see why he likes it so much! Stunning flower acrostic you have presented and sure to do well in the contest!
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Date: 4/13/2011 2:39:00 PM
Yes yes a lovely vine! A fine choice. Thank you so much for your comments always. Light & Love
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Date: 4/13/2011 8:00:00 AM
A beautifully worded poem Paula,enjoyed this.Good luck in the contest.Love, Gautami
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Date: 4/13/2011 5:49:00 AM
Lovely lines in your Acrostic entry for the contest Paula.. giving the honeysuckle great personality of beauty and poise ..good luck my friend.. with luv.. hope u are well and happy ..
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Date: 4/12/2011 11:30:00 AM
Wow!Amazing poetry from you Paula.This is wonderful.How was Flame of Forest in Google?-kash
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