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Honey To a Spoon

the night sky wavers in your frosted light imaginings of ever after cling like honey to a spoon. you face the earth as sister, smiling coyly from the cratered depth of dimpled cheek and chin. edged in the kohl of Cleopatra’s line your brows appear to question even starlight your oceanic orbs dry of tears still twinkle in the remnant asteroid powder of eons past. beauteous Luna purse not your lips let reflections of a brighter hue let glide across your roman countenance so bold and teach the fiery sun of catered glory for it is you who rule when day is done. *dedicated to my muse Rhonda!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/30/2012 11:06:00 PM
Debs, when I really want to KNOW something, I go all out!! (referencing your comment to me on drunken pen) So I accomplished what takes some years to do? Awesome!!! hahaha. Luv ya, Andrea
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Date: 5/22/2012 8:20:00 AM
I am stopping by your poetry to thank you for your kind comments on my writing. It has been a pleasure to read yours today Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/17/2012 12:31:00 PM
Beautiful! Your poetry is something else, Debbie. I'm a fan!
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Date: 5/16/2012 5:44:00 PM
oooh, love it: you who rule when day is done!!! My muse rules that way too! soupmail
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Date: 5/16/2012 2:15:00 PM
I do agree with the scribe - this is very well worded. Sometimes I think I just use the same dozen words and search for a different one. You seem to have them all right there.
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Date: 5/16/2012 1:45:00 PM
Wow, this is an amazing write Debbie! I'm happy to be your muse anytime. Thanks for the dedication. You always inspire me with your breathtaking poetry. Blessings and Love, Rhonda
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