Honey

Soft, silky, sweet and slow Sexy, sensual and aromatic OOOOOOOH Please release your concealing top Send me into a daze let mind go . . . AAAAAAAH Natural taste so rich it’s lovely Thank you bee's for producing honey!

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Jayachandran Chakrapany

Date: 6/20/2012 10:28:00 AM

a unique ''honey '' poem .jk

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet

Date: 6/4/2012 10:00:00 PM

BRILLIANT VERY CAPTIVATING INDEED!!!!! YOU ARE THE HONEY AND THAT QUEEN BEE HONESTLY.....GREAT WRITE!!!!!

Dan Kearley

Date: 6/4/2012 9:16:00 PM

Ooooo...And.... Aaahhhh.. I loved that! (Honey) (o:

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 6/1/2012 4:12:00 PM

Lol laughing at Joise's comment on the bumblebees in his poem not producing honey..that threw me off for a slight moment..enjoyed this poem here..love your work Brittany!!!

Justcallme Britt
Date: 6/1/2012 4:47:00 PM

SO SWEET!! :D

Josie Whitehead

Date: 6/1/2012 3:38:00 PM

Ooooh - yes I always thank the bees for their beautiful honey, and often write about them. I've just put a "bee poem" on here. Thank you bees. But I think my bumblebees in the poem don't produce honey, only pollinate the flowers.

Justcallme Britt
Date: 6/1/2012 4:46:00 PM

That is so true. I was too lazy to do my research beforehand. I know that's NOT a good thing LOL. I was really just struggling with a decent way to end the poem just in case you couldn't tell :/

Justcallme Britt
Date: 6/1/2012 4:46:00 PM

But yea... I'm gonna try to fix that