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Honesty At the Edge of Sleep

honesty at the edge of sleep captive by the night deepest black it touches into my soul where turmoil presides. so many questions on millipede feet stomping in army boots across all my conscience; a voice singing soft upon the ear was there not more? could you not have trod that one mile more? in your searches were they not for you to find love by your wit defined when all the while scattered as shells along the shore of your wandering sea were there not times to love in many forms, colours have you missed the whole lesson? it is not how much you are loved. it is how much of your love is given, freely.

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Date: 11/27/2017 9:52:00 AM
Nicely penned.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 11/27/2017 11:47:00 AM
Thank you .
Date: 11/21/2017 2:32:00 PM
Lovely "wake up call!" I love your free form, and imagery; "stomping in army boots across all my conscience."
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 11/21/2017 2:47:00 PM
Hi thank you so very much.
Date: 11/21/2017 1:28:00 PM
Hi poet how are you? Your poems is very good. I read your poems. I want to translate your poems in my language in Bengali and Japanese. I need your permission. And I want to communicate with you personally.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 11/21/2017 5:54:00 PM
Thank you for reading my poem and commenting.

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