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Honest Poem About My Life

I was asked to write an honest portrayal of my life- I could say I am a daughter, mother and wife. My days are full of so much more than just those things- I spend time sketching portraits, playing guitar and I sing. My past is full of such loss, blame and internal regret- But the lessons I have learned I shall never forget. I spend a few hours a day writing verses from my soul- Expressing passion from my pain and joy that makes me whole. I compose lyrics and create melodies sitting on my balcony- Forming such dulcet rhythm and sweet euphonious harmony. The bond I share with two sisters transcends space and time- I lost one tragically to suicide, it turned my eyesight blind. I’ve been married for fourteen years but together for twenty- I have a husband who adores me and I reciprocate plenty. I am a stay at home wife and a mother to a beauty queen- She is my soul-saving wonder who is almost a teen. I have fought addiction and my life was almost over- I am happy to say I am now almost eight years sober. The last thirty-six years have been full of calamity and pain- But through my faith I have found the sunshine through the rain. My life is abundant in anguish yet deep love and compassion- I try to live my days in benediction in a lovely womanly fashion. I am honest when I say the pain from my past taught me lessons- But I am also grateful for all my day-to-day sanctioned blessings. Your Best Honest Poem Sponsor: Lewis Raynes Date Written: September 17, 2016

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Date: 9/21/2016 12:15:00 PM
Honesty so simply expressed that it shines!Its one of your best Laura!Congrats to you!
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/21/2016 2:13:00 PM
thank you sweet Sara :)-luloo
Date: 9/21/2016 11:58:00 AM
All I can say is that I am honoured to have been placed anywhere near your poem, it is really well written with much detail but simplistically beautifully put - from sadness to happiness, and back again - I am glad you are in Love, not many people achieve this devoted Love nowadays. In short - well done on your deserved placement Regards, Mark
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Date: 9/21/2016 2:13:00 PM
awww thank you so much sweet Mark :)-luloo
Date: 9/21/2016 11:10:00 AM
Wow Laura. so talented in every way.
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/21/2016 2:12:00 PM
thank you sweet Jean :)-luloo
Date: 9/21/2016 10:49:00 AM
Courageous write LuLoo, congratulations...
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Date: 9/21/2016 2:12:00 PM
thank you dear Charlie :)-luloo
Date: 9/21/2016 5:56:00 AM
Coming back to say congrats! Agnes
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Date: 9/21/2016 2:11:00 PM
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/21/2016 2:11:00 PM
thank you lovely Agnes :)-luloo
Date: 9/21/2016 12:43:00 AM
Congratulations and one step at a time, hey? great writing and great honesty. I like this poem very much. Many wishes, Kai
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/21/2016 2:11:00 PM
many thanks kai :)-luloo
Date: 9/20/2016 10:43:00 PM
congratulations on ur win Luloo, i loved ur honest journey and the fun as well as trauma u share, beautiful write. Your poetic friend Lewis.
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Date: 9/21/2016 2:10:00 PM
thank you so much Lewis, I am grateful you found my honest poem winning worthy dear friend :)-luloo
Date: 9/19/2016 11:39:00 AM
Honesty knows no judgement but envy found in truth. I liked this poem very much.
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Date: 9/21/2016 2:10:00 PM
thank you sweet Sharon :)-luloo
Date: 9/19/2016 5:07:00 AM
You give me hope.
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/19/2016 7:00:00 AM
awww thank you sweet Raychill :)-luloo
Date: 9/18/2016 5:20:00 PM
Thanks for sharing so much about your life, Luloo. I am glad your faith helped you overcome difficult times. Hugs, Agnes
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Date: 9/18/2016 6:24:00 PM
thank you lovely Agnes :)-luloo
Date: 9/18/2016 3:52:00 PM
Lovely, dear. The honesty comes through in every line. I can tell that you are truly grateful for your blessings, dear. Lovely
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Date: 9/18/2016 6:24:00 PM
thank you sweet Eileen :)-luloo
Date: 9/18/2016 1:38:00 PM
Such an honest bio Luloo I know you have faced challenges in your life but with the love and support from your family and your faith you have come through the bad times:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/18/2016 6:23:00 PM
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/18/2016 6:23:00 PM
many many thanks Jan :)-luloo
Date: 9/18/2016 1:34:00 PM
A great biography Laura. Ur pen is well fertile. Brilliant.... simply... brilliant. I am speechless really. A big 7 from me. Best wishes for the contest. Hope u will win.........// hugs// Manmath......
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Date: 9/18/2016 6:23:00 PM
thank you very much Manmath :)-luloo

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