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Homelessman's Toll

I could have given more - I could have spared twenty bucks But instead I gave him coins And not nearly enough For the thousand watt grin He beamed at me Instead I felt guilty as sin For what I was thinking - He’s gonna buy crack; he’s conning me - When did I become this jaded man, Who thinks everyone’s running a scam? Maybe he really needed the help, And I drove away, gripping my money belt 10/30/11 Received 10th place in "Do You Know the Cardboard Man?" contest

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Date: 12/22/2011 7:45:00 PM
believe me if God wanted him to have twenty he would have got twenty. but what if God wanted you to give twenty then what did God think of you. T.S.
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Date: 11/7/2011 9:24:00 PM
Hi! friend, you have nicely worded in your wining like poem. Enjoyed with heart. Thanks for your comment on my poem. bl
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Date: 11/5/2011 10:47:00 PM
susan;-) CONGRATULATIONS, ON YOUR WIN~ Have a wonderful weekend, GOD BLESS,..p.d.
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Date: 11/4/2011 6:09:00 PM
Great write Susan and so very true nowadays on how many people view the homeless this way. Well done and congrats on your win. I also wanted to thank you for my placement in your contest I appreciate it very much, I apologize for being so late in doing so, I have been ill. Alexa
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Date: 11/4/2011 5:37:00 PM
Susan, just saw your new contest. Great topic!! Keep 'em coming, hon. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/3/2011 9:15:00 PM
Your take on the subject here is down to earth. Marvelous, Susan. Congratulations.
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Date: 11/3/2011 9:15:00 PM
Can't believe I missed this one you posted earlier!
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Date: 11/3/2011 5:14:00 PM
Congrats Susan on a top notch win with this exciting entry on the cardboard man luv.. superb words...
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Date: 11/3/2011 1:45:00 PM
Wow, this really shot an arrow through my heart, Susan. I guess we all become jaded because there are so many con artists out there, but some people really need help. Congratulations on your win in Paula's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/3/2011 9:19:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Susan... Sometimes those feelings come to us... I love how you wrote it, simple but interesting.. :)
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Date: 11/3/2011 7:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Paula's "Do You Know The Cardboard Man" contest Susan. It is so easy to have these feeling the way our world is today. Love, Carol
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