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Homeless

the empty house stands with broken windows and doors – a doll on the sill 12/5/13

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Skat A

Date: 3/15/2014 10:08:00 AM

wow, what a picture... SKAT

Cheryl Aldea

Date: 3/13/2014 10:40:00 PM

Congrats Debbie....

John Beam

Date: 3/12/2014 7:42:00 AM

congratulations Debbie, very nice contrast

Tim Ryerson

Date: 3/11/2014 6:29:00 PM

The doll on the sill is the killer here cher... A stunning and extremely compelling conclusion to the picture you have painted... I wager you have done one on canvas too huh? If not you certainly should...

Paul Callus

Date: 3/11/2014 3:05:00 PM

very effective indeed! // congrats on your win // paul

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 3/11/2014 11:48:00 AM

congrats on your win friend Debbie ;) hugs ;)

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 3/10/2014 6:14:00 PM

A brilliant Monoku, and a fabulous image bringing out thoughts of what could have happened here. Congratulations on your well deserved win - Connie

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 3/10/2014 5:15:00 PM

real atmosphere created with just a few words; an eerie image - congrats on your 1st place win :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/10/2014 4:59:00 PM

A haunting piece, congratulations Debbie.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/10/2014 4:58:00 PM

wow, this is GOOD stuff, Debs. Congratulations.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/10/2014 4:37:00 PM

- One Amazing Line - Congratulations on your fine win, Debbie ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/10/2014 4:16:00 PM

Wow!! Way to go..Sara

Aiyah Torres

Date: 3/10/2014 3:47:00 PM

my dear Debbie... Congratulations on your win! ....a meaningful poem!! ..it hits my heart so well ..tHank you.. ^__^

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/10/2014 2:54:00 PM

ahh.......love it !! I had forgotten about this contest, ...it is a pleasure to be in such good company !! Congratulations Deb!

Constance La France

Date: 3/10/2014 2:43:00 PM

Congratulations on first place in my contest. Sorry for the long delay in judging, eyesight problems. Constance

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/2/2014 11:20:00 AM

posted mine now-- sorry have to sleep now and ok will try not to jump! hugs back!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 1/23/2014 10:03:00 AM

So much said here, so much that can be gathered from this monoku, Debbie! and yes, it is your little monkey being weird-- thank you for making me smile, yes, my current name on here is hard to remember, eh? now I am being fickle minded and I think I really will embarrass myself with the sonnet if ever I do write it, oops! I will peek here & there, sighs, me just still mulling over Linda-Marie's passing...thank you for putting me on the list--

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 12/31/2013 3:10:00 AM

awesome monoku friend Debbie. wishing you a Happy New Year :) hugs

Peter Dome

Date: 12/21/2013 10:31:00 AM

We have so many empty houses over here, bur still a housing crisis. Maybe the Queen with all her houses and empty rooms could house the homeless, I would, guess she wouldn't.. Love your write, the doll in the sill, something sad, so many stories of the past untold. Well done. Pete.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/21/2013 6:36:00 AM

I can feel the emotion in this work..Great job for the contest..Reads like a winning entry to me..Thanks for the visit to my page..Your comments are uplifting..Sara

Jack Horne

Date: 12/14/2013 4:47:00 PM

love this powerful write, Debs x

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 12/12/2013 3:02:00 PM

An awesome one line poem -heart wrenching. Thanks for visiting my poem The Twelfth Man and for your kind appreciation Debbie. Love. -Mohammad

Painted Hunter

Date: 12/9/2013 2:05:00 PM

And that's how it's done.....;)

Donna Jones

Date: 12/8/2013 9:06:00 PM

A vivid scene Debbie...really enjoyed...

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 12/6/2013 4:38:00 PM

Fantastic image. And thanks for your tip on how to add colour to my blogs. Sorry it has taken so long to reply, but it has taken me forever to work out how to view my blogs.