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My home sweet home be, by a salt water taffy sea Where I dream dreamy dreams of whipped creams, From a pillow of marshmallow on a bed of Jell-O Under a bedspread of gingerbread, iced in red, My doors and floors made of graham cracker s'mores And gumdrops, lollipops and candy-coated rooftops. (December, 6th, 2022)

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Date: 12/12/2022 7:30:00 AM
Sweet! Congratulations. — MDJ
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/12/2023 9:58:00 AM
Thank you so much :)
Date: 12/12/2022 6:32:00 AM
Fantastic! Congratulations!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/12/2023 9:58:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 12/9/2022 11:17:00 AM
Great penning Kelly, with nice imagery and insightfulness. Blessings,Gordon
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/29/2023 10:09:00 AM
Thank you, Gordon... I'm pleased that you enjoyed this one!
Date: 12/8/2022 1:02:00 PM
What a "sweet" poem, Kelly. I like your use of the internal rhymes, it really makes this poem pop. I enjoyed reading it. John
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/26/2023 10:42:00 AM
Thanks, John... I'm pleased that you enjoyed this one!
Date: 12/7/2022 12:33:00 AM
Wow, And i'm on a diet. A poem as good as sunshine, Kelly. Love it...
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/24/2023 9:50:00 AM
Thanks, Harry... I'm pleased that you enjoyed this one!

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