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It wasn't because he brought her flowers.... It wasn't because he wined and dined her.... She loved him because he spent hours on the computer trying to track down the 1970 Brooks Robinson baseball card for their oldest son's birthday She loved him because he played with their kids, even after a hard day at work... baseball games in the big front yard, cheering them on... not getting angry when the youngest son knocked a homer... ...straight through the living room window ~

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Date: 5/27/2015 6:56:00 AM
excellent piece. returning after a while to read such a refreshing package full of familiar emotions to the mind is simply blissful. A wonderful and commanding 7 here. Keep on writing.
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Date: 5/25/2015 7:17:00 PM
An excellent write, Carrie! Congrats on your well-deserved win! Love, KIm
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Date: 5/25/2015 5:38:00 PM
CARRIE, Congratulations on your win. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 5/25/2015 11:06:00 AM
That's the woman for me...I love doing that with the kids...congrats Carrie
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Date: 5/25/2015 1:13:00 AM
Carrie:) Congratulations, Love SKAT
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Date: 5/24/2015 8:10:00 PM
Awww Carrie you are all heart! I so wish I could meet you in person sometime! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 5/24/2015 2:42:00 AM
Superb take on theme Carrie! Gl in contest,, sure will do well!
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Date: 5/24/2015 1:23:00 AM
How sweet and inspiring are the contributions to prepare a worthy player of basket ball the most fascinating Games of USA. Excellent Poem to teach those who get irritated even by the games of their kids and a beautiful Entry dear friend for the Contest. My good wishes for your inspiring write. I have added some steps on my Blog to ease your Vote casting. Just see them before going for that. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra K Kapoor
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Date: 5/23/2015 6:54:00 PM
Thank goodness I have never had a window broken from a baseball. My son just had to replace his pickup window because a 9 year old hit a home run over the fence at a game. a 7 hugs
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Date: 5/23/2015 6:30:00 PM
Brilliant....good luck in the contest...
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