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todays the day the awful day they come to take my home away head cases with suit cases never a rush but still races is this the end how did it come to this first my health then my job then wife these very walls supported me my whole dam life built by my father with his very own hands now the baliff is taking my family lands just one more month i had said just last week on the phone but the bank said no we just want your home well i thouht ahead plotted carefully my next home at least in my new home ill be left in peace and alone not much family left here so i wont be much missed just say goodluck to the neighbours then one last time ill get pissed they came on time with piece of paper in hand knock knock on the door 'sir its time to leave your land' no response from within perhaps hes already left baliff enters open door to give house a check hed left alright done it his own way in his own place his lifeless body swung gently , hint of a smile on his face

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Date: 8/1/2013 12:42:00 AM
Many congratulations xx
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Date: 7/31/2013 3:54:00 PM
Thank You for entering my contest
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Date: 7/31/2013 8:00:00 AM
Oh was not expecting that ending. So sad, congrats on win.
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Steven Mitchell
Date: 7/31/2013 8:28:00 AM
not expecting meself, thanks

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