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lingering softly in the angelic silence of a magical new night... i remember whispered words the softness of your breath tingling the nape of my neck... your eyes deep pools touch light as a feather my head on your chest... the sea scented air delicately cocooned us our lips barely touched... waves lulled our own melody of sweet sacred tunes as hearts became one... i remember the moment that time stood still... how do i describe something bigger than words... for in the air that i breathe it is you who has blessed me... heaven sent you from the stars above... the sound of your heartbeat was when i knew... i was home. reworked 08-10-2016

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James Inman

Date: 8/21/2019 8:21:00 AM

I love the way you did this one. I felt the quickening of your heart beat and increase of intensity as the stanzas shortened leading to the defining moment of the last three words.

Paul Callus

Date: 2/26/2017 10:22:00 AM

Hi Lynn....though there is no comment here, I am sure that I read this poem before. You have a way with words....poetically beautiful and romantic. #7 Best regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/24/2016 12:13:00 AM

this is so fantastic, Lynn. one of the most romantic ones I have seen all week. a FAVE

Lynn Marie
Date: 8/26/2016 2:47:00 AM

..you are too kind...i am touched you enjoyed it.. and as a fave too.. I appreciate you and your amazing poetry...thank you so very much :-) bundles of blessings and hugs to you..and a few 'virtual cheezies' too..lol lynn

John Hamilton

Date: 8/22/2016 10:22:00 AM

Loved it Lynn Marie, what a palette of words you have, and your brush strokes amazing! Loved the way you reduce your stanzas from 3 lines to 2 very effective for the reader to savor the flavor of your words!

Lynn Marie
Date: 8/26/2016 2:51:00 AM

thank you very much john for your thoughtful words, kindness and friendly visits :-) you are very talented and I appreciate your encouragement :-) lynn

Bl Devnath

Date: 8/17/2016 1:22:00 PM

It's an exceptional poem of romantic feeling. Beautiful pen used to express the golden moment with loved one. My favorite too. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl

Lynn Marie
Date: 8/20/2016 2:07:00 AM

..your comment is pure poetry..thank you for the "sunshine" and lovely visits..have a wonderful weekend :-)

Vladislav Raven

Date: 8/13/2016 11:25:00 AM

Hi Lynn, a most beautiful poetic write with such loving emotions dosplayed. Romance does sing from your pen in this write, a gentle elegance. One can lose oneself within the feelings. A definite seven Lynn. Hugs....Mike. Lynn.

Lynn Marie
Date: 8/20/2016 2:16:00 AM

...you are the master of romance mike...i appreciate your poetry, kind words and happy visits..thank you so much :-)