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Please tell me that I'm here to see my mom after this four years without any calls came starving, lonely, alone, abused, ruined by the unfair world, went to the other land perhaps,finally, the fortune was there,would be there I nurtured them, I served for their demands, I just need is to pay me back, but without knowing, oh why it would be I just dream to escape to the tale of poverty,but they treat me as awful as vagabond cat hit my thin, rough skin until I see one light,o tell me please m I at home?want to go home

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Date: 8/2/2022 8:54:00 PM
beautiful imagery! it captures the reality of a home..
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Date: 6/14/2015 11:47:00 AM
I hope you find your home from where you'll never roam. And know that it is there within your heart. Be it gable or a dome, be it wood or Styrofoam. May you never be alone or be apart. Peace. :)
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Date: 4/23/2015 8:06:00 AM
We all need a home. I would never want to go back to the destructive home of my childhood. I am glad that with God, my wife and son, I have been gifted a peaceful home. This is a emotion filled house you have built with your words.
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Elai Cee
Date: 4/23/2015 10:31:00 AM
God bless u Richard
Date: 4/19/2015 8:41:00 AM
The simple words say a lot and convey strong emotions without a lot of window dressing. Nice job. Emile.
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Elai Cee
Date: 4/22/2015 2:21:00 AM
ty happy to see ur comment
Date: 4/15/2015 7:55:00 PM
Such a poem beautifully constructed on shape then the simple words used marked a thorough yearning to be belong.. heart melting poem!~olive eloisa
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Date: 4/14/2015 10:20:00 AM
Hope you get your wish; a beautiful piece of poetry.
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Date: 4/14/2015 6:24:00 AM
- Elai, nice to see you back :) - A great poem ...... home sweet home :) - Hope you soon get home to your loved ones - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Elai Cee
Date: 4/14/2015 6:48:00 AM
thanks Anne
Date: 4/14/2015 12:18:00 AM
hi elai.. nice to see you here again with this poignant work.. i know you miss home.. just wish you can come back!.. huggs!
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Elai Cee
Date: 4/14/2015 6:22:00 AM
hu Net ... miss yah a lot :)
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 4/14/2015 12:18:00 AM
good shape form!
Date: 4/13/2015 7:59:00 AM
I love your concrete poem. Written a few of them myself. Fun to read.
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Elai Cee
Date: 4/13/2015 8:04:00 AM
thanks ")

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