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There is something about it That even I cannot describe A serenity that wakes To dwell inside my mind For no peace shall live Free, if not within its walls Nor is it bound to dance If afar the cadence of its halls For no matter how far the days shall go There’s never a place like Home

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/29/2010 1:20:00 PM

Yes little Dorothy ;) I wrote for I think your contest...I couldn't work in "hate" I hope it's OK? or do I have to go back to the drawing board? Light & Love

Brian Strand

Date: 2/9/2010 11:50:00 PM

Farah thanks for your kind words and comments today Rgds Brian

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/28/2009 12:06:00 PM

Great short write on a great topic. There are so many ways to say this idea but you have sumed it up very well. Keep the creative and magical pen flowing. Sara

James Marshall Goff

Date: 8/30/2009 6:59:00 PM

lovely! Farah! jimbo

James Christian

Date: 8/27/2009 11:47:00 AM

Reminds me of the ending of "The Wizard of Oz". well wretten god bless from james

Brian Strand

Date: 8/27/2009 7:42:00 AM

So much truth here Farah.Thank you for your kind words today.Rgds Brian

Date: 7/31/2009 12:12:00 PM

I agree. Wonderful uplifting message in this poem. Thank you for sharing it and for your kind words on my poem. Keep on writing! Karen

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 7/31/2009 11:12:00 AM

Hey Farah "The young one" love this peaceful reflection of home! There no place like home! well done! Laura :0)

John Rhinem

Date: 7/31/2009 7:56:00 AM

Smile! "Yes," there is no place like home "Young Gifted Farah Chamma;" even if that home if families or even ones own town or home land!!? Excellent expression of hearts place, within "Your Own Precious Souls Eyes!!!!":):):) Smile, hope that life is treating "You & Yours Extrememy Well;" and "My Love & Warmth Forever & Always, 'To You All,' Eternally, John!!!!":):):) "Have A Very Beautiful Day!!!" Bye ~

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/31/2009 7:48:00 AM

Farah where have you been? I am so happy you are home dear friend. Your poem is so light and peaceful. Splendid. Love, Carol

Derrick Burton

Date: 7/31/2009 7:43:00 AM

Beautiful poetry, and also well written. Home is great and even when you think you need that getaway when you leave you always want to come back. Enjoy your day.

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/31/2009 7:22:00 AM

Reminds me of the ending of "The Wizard of Oz". Serenity is hard to find - isn't it? Thank you for your kind words. Yours Matthew Anish