Holy Lord

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unrhymed tercets

As the living water Moves within streams falling down from the mountain source Baptising love in crystal light With burning flames inside the soul For keeps each word holds reverence to your name

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/1/2016 3:36:00 AM

- A lovely poem, Liam :) - Enjoy reading, as always - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :) *- On The Right Side Of The Moon - Poem of the Week !!! :)

Angeline Haikutwinkle

Date: 2/29/2016 9:50:00 PM

Love the style of the poem, looks like a wave rising ;)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 2/29/2016 12:14:00 PM

Hi Liam!Wow! Wow! Wow!This is a most very beautiful and outstanding excellent uplifting love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Amazing piece.Just dazzling!Very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most beautiful, heartfelt, uplifting, heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!So wonderful!Just powerful!I truly enjoy it!Very sweet thoughts.A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Excellent poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^