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Holy Is the Lamb

this is the hour resting on the basin of a sacred chalice awakened by crowns of stars peeping then, swelling blue yellow... while duskfall filters the shape of a world kneeling on wooden pews and candles; the winds touching the valley that knows this is the hour… when the homage of many an outstretched arms surrender to the blazing wisps of a godly dawn, of late twilight's hour ... for this is the hour, lightened by stroked peace offering the vessel of divine light along primeval rivers, and earthen clay: shadow to light light to shadow reaching the final call as on this the hour, a scented air bestows chaste stillness… until one last remembering when the gentle lamb of holiness circles through an arched moment , while kindness of eyes bows unto this hour. -------------- For Second Place Only ll Contest Sponsor: Laura Loo Re-posted 7/9/2016 Judged 10/5/2014

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Date: 10/18/2014 11:25:00 PM
Spinning a magical spiritual write of the one true God...words nestled on calm waves....you gently and respectfully carried me down this poetic stream...always a pleasure to read your work! :)
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Date: 10/16/2014 10:10:00 AM
love the poem Nette, well deserved feature... God bless, Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/13/2014 10:33:00 AM
Undoubtedly, a poem of the day. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/7/2014 6:52:00 PM
Congrats Nette,it is definitely not too much of you to be here everyday as you are simply the constant best.
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Date: 10/7/2014 6:06:00 PM
Very nice poem and congrats on being poem of the day. Was a great read.
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Date: 10/7/2014 3:26:00 PM
Nice poem and congrats for your poem being the poem of the Day. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
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Date: 10/7/2014 1:38:00 PM
- CONGRATULATIONS P.O.T.D.,NETTE !!!
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Date: 10/7/2014 1:23:00 PM
Dear Nette, Your imagery is beautiful. Congratulations on a well-deserved "Poem of the day."
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Date: 10/7/2014 10:09:00 AM
This is the best poem EVER!
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Date: 10/7/2014 9:20:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS MY GORGEOUS FRIEND. THIS TRULY QUALIFIES AS THE POEM OF ANY DAY.
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Date: 10/7/2014 1:26:00 AM
Congrats nette on being featured...hugs
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Date: 10/6/2014 3:20:00 PM
this is awesome, Nette - so pleased to see it was a winner
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Date: 10/6/2014 12:30:00 PM
You are a true master of words Nette. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 10/6/2014 11:30:00 AM
- A wonderful 2nd place in the contest! -- CONGRATULATIONS NETTE !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/6/2014 8:30:00 AM
Congrats on the win Nette.
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Date: 10/6/2014 8:22:00 AM
One of the best I have read, congratulations!
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Date: 10/6/2014 7:12:00 AM
Well composed poem on faith, congrats. nette
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Date: 10/5/2014 10:50:00 PM
Congratulations Nette on your superlative write that has claim a 2nd placement in my contest! Verlena
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Date: 10/5/2014 3:28:00 PM
Awesome write, a solid 7 rating and a pure joy to read today.. Surely a strong winner... Bravo!!!!!!
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Date: 10/5/2014 12:11:00 PM
Wonderful piece nette...your faith shines through...hugs Tim
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Date: 10/5/2014 12:00:00 PM
I'm a writer in transit and just breezed through, Nette. Glad I did because this transcendental poem seeps through my awareness and makes me you open the eyes of spirit. Thank you!
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Date: 10/5/2014 11:54:00 AM
- Beautifully my friend, Nette - A winning poem, I want to believe - good luck! - Have a nice Sunday afternoon / evening :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/5/2014 11:27:00 AM
nicely written, to add a point 2 thousand years ago a baby was born, this baby never traveled more than 2 hundred miles from its place of birth, yet changed the world for all of time
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Date: 10/5/2014 11:07:00 AM
Hi, my very dear friend Nette! I super love your verse. Kakanta muna ako: Sino pa ba ang tatalo sa pambatong Pilipina(hope u know the tune:). Thank u so much for sharing! Kudos! By d way thanks a lot also for your loving greetings on my b-day! Quite late to read all surprises 'cuz I was with my friends since my b-day count down last night. 2 x parties including a dinner a while ago (for my bday & farewell of my best friend here moving to US: happy & sad) Big hugs ! love lots, Leonora
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