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Hollowness Of Nirvana

An opening's gap Construed as silver lining's Lack— not wings; just blue stupor— Clouds spinning circles. Still crowns kings; a wisp of rain Falls in brief— in heaven's clasp. Why must light always be strewn of, Shortened like tearing tears?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 10/12/2023 8:11:00 PM
A vibrant and thought-provoking stream of consciousness.
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Date: 8/19/2023 8:29:00 PM
Your so incredibly passionate with your crafting of words... it is a gift to read from your mind Paige! A.S.
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Date: 8/11/2023 6:08:00 PM
This work of art is nothing short of a masterpiece. Its delicacy is adorned with a touch of extraordinary language, unquestionably remarkable! The pondering of this matter has long intrigued me as well.
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Date: 8/11/2023 4:31:00 PM
I've always wondered that myself. Hmmm
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