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Hollow

I hang my head a dripping tear, you pull away , The lonliness , my only fear I'm feeling shallow and so hollow , the feelings I have so hard to swallow . A twisted heart my broken mind, I am the pain that's been refined. My sadness brews like no tomorrow . filling my veins so full of sorrow. I'm blacking out or so it seems, it's like a needle so full of dreams.. James Stevenson............................

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Date: 2/13/2009 12:26:00 PM
James, Wow! "A needle full of dreams!" Why does it take such sorrow to bring out the best in artists?
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Date: 1/31/2009 11:38:00 AM
wow, you are spilling out your heart of the moment and gives this poetry life. enjoyed reading it and have pleasant day. also check my latest poetry.
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Date: 1/24/2009 3:36:00 PM
So full of extreme pain and sadness. So many beautiful lines, great job. Laurie
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Date: 1/24/2009 3:19:00 PM
James, this is so full of pain and emotion...I can feel it. Very well done. Donna G.
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