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Hollow

I burned my hand on the stove again longing for it's heat thinking it a friend But instead it scars Instead it burns Sucking my oxygen It seems I'll never learn Like a moth to light Tricked by it's beauty flickering and bright It feels so warm it lures me in I long to meld into it to peel of this skin A chocolate Easter bunny Just waiting to melt Destined to desire This fire I felt.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/19/2008 8:45:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup. Please continue with your writing and share it with the world. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/9/2008 10:23:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry soup. Dont hurt yourself. Touching write. Micahel Torres
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Date: 11/7/2008 11:21:00 PM
Filled with much emotion mixed with sadness, as the reader feels the representation of lost self esteme..... Love yourself first dear..... Very emotional write...
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Date: 11/7/2008 5:30:00 PM
Great poem, Athena.Welcome to Poetrysoup! This is a wonderful poetry site.Glad you're with us.Love and blessings!D.
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Date: 11/7/2008 3:08:00 PM
We all get lured at some time or another and learn life's harsh lessons. I guess the hopeful part here, is that we learn and move on. Great poetry. Welcome to PoetrySoup! Love, shar
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