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Hole of a Doughnut

On the hole of the doughnut There is emptiness and blank outside the hole a thrill of tastebuds Ferris wheel topped with chocolate bits or sprinkled with crunchy nuts and soft fluffy marshmallows Of which one lips samples and sometimes lick then bit by bit, bites swallows whole the hole of the doughnut waits For someones' finger to do the fill Or maybe give it a little feel Either roughness or softness or it's bittersweet taste So thus, a person's borrowed life Isn't it? by: olive_eloi 5:36pm revised: May 18, 2014 ---------+-----------»»»

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Date: 11/24/2014 12:03:00 PM
A Jam doughnut and a coffee, care to join me Olive? - James :Pxx
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/27/2014 2:57:00 AM
someday someday.. :) ill join you.. :D
Date: 7/18/2014 2:59:00 PM
Once again, thank you for the sweet reply...PD
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Date: 6/26/2014 7:02:00 PM
Oh girl you have made me so hungry!!! I can see you writing this while eating a doughnut, contemplating it's existence. Hey Grats on your win chicky! Well done!
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/21/2014 9:28:00 AM
hahhaa yes.. :D so this came out Cassie.. :D!!! thanks much sorry for this late reply.. :D
Date: 6/26/2014 4:47:00 PM
Congrats on the win with a very tasty poem
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/21/2014 9:27:00 AM
thanks much greg.. :)
Date: 6/26/2014 8:07:00 AM
Olive, congrats on a great win with this well thought out comparison... Well done!... Hugs.. Arlene
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/26/2014 11:19:00 AM
thank you Arlene..:) GBU
Date: 6/26/2014 7:47:00 AM
Congratulations Olive_eloi!!! I keep on praising your originality of thought; that humble doughnut hole too has served you well with the message passed. Thus..a fitting ending! // paul
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/26/2014 11:18:00 AM
Thank you Paul..:) am glad you like it as I am when I write this one..:) now you know why sometimes I like doughnuts..:)
Date: 6/26/2014 6:56:00 AM
Hi Olive, love the great imagery - just a beautiful write and deserving of the great win! Congratulations, my friend on your superb win! I need to go grab a doughnut with a glass of milk - thanks for making me hungry:-)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/27/2014 2:55:00 AM
thank you so much Pandita.. :) God bless us all.. :)
Date: 6/26/2014 1:25:00 AM
Enjoyed the poem with the morning cup of tea. Congrats on the win
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/26/2014 11:07:00 AM
Thank you Sir..:) GBU
Date: 6/25/2014 11:31:00 PM
Oi, You must be so awesome, my son and I judged this contest.. Olive, . Congratulations:) Enjoyed every winning poem, on my list. Thanks for the support. If you like, stop by my latest blog "Poetic symphony" ....LOVE ~LINDA
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/26/2014 6:35:00 AM
Thank you Linda.. :) I appreciate the place.. :)
Date: 1/16/2014 5:31:00 AM
Very deep and another one for people to ponder on my friend. I interpret it talking about how one fills the inside of them with God or of the world. You are doing good my friend your soup friend Michael
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/16/2014 2:53:00 PM
yes, you got the right interpretation on it.. that was actually what am thinking about when i wrote it.. :) As nowadays in the situation I am in, Having the presence of GOD within my life is truly one great joy and truly makes me see that i need to stand still and lift all to him :)

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