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Holding Unto Eden's Gift

If an angel were to look into these eyes Sweeping beauty she would capture something Way far beyond a soul's grasp drifting away into another world Inside this planet revolving smoke signals halo circles your Candlelight finding one warm doting dream Purity eclipsinég the very starlight breathes behind the lids heartbeats explode true This heart takes wings and flies away with you

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Angeline Haikutwinkle

Date: 3/11/2016 8:30:00 AM

Flying away into a dream indeed ;) love this!

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 3/8/2016 7:16:00 AM

Hi Liam!:))Wow!!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful, sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Amazing style!Very wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^