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holding crossroads

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holding crossroads

one soul 
moans in song
upon dead remains
of a kingdom
to questions

turned over sideways
opening gates 
of emotions 
in shades 
of grey

blushing clouds
igniting feelings
in the cannon face
burning powder scorched
from the ashes

one dark horse
from hell
searches beauty
to extinguish
the fire
burning embers
of passion

at the gates of hell
no entry
salvation in light
building bridges
finding feelings
within emotions

as he rears 
on his front legs
with dark feelings
on the vampire's grave
love is in the deep
a battle 
for light

warmth within
a happy face
smiling the sun
blushing dreams
in happiness
to the end 

to write
the final chapter
one's masterpiece 
one dream
come true

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  1. Date: 10/22/2014 12:20:00 PM
    Excellent written my friend love the fast pace, cheri

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 10/22/2014 12:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you kindly cherl for the wonderful comment heartfelt dear friend
  1. Date: 9/25/2013 4:10:00 PM
    Enjoyed the quick tempo. No time to waste!

  1. Date: 9/25/2013 2:08:00 PM
    Hi Liam. Lovely write my friend.. Ken

  1. Date: 9/25/2013 1:19:00 PM
    - A very beautiful poem Liam, a pleasure to read today. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/25/2013 11:11:00 AM
    The final chapter of each and everyone is indeed in our hands.Powerful words penned Liam

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/25/2013 11:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you deeply my dear friend heartfelt appreciated having a good strong cup of lyons tea ha