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Holding Back Tears

When granny was still alive she used to tell me~ " Don't cry when I die, for tears are melted salt that had escaped from oceans; Spare your tears, spare your salt, Just sing me a song~ a song I first taught you." Two decades ago, she bade adieu, and in front of her coffin, With eyes frozen,I stood still holding back my tears~ the hardest thing to do; It rained in my heart as I began to sing her, "Que Sera, Sera ( What ever will be, will be)". Grandma, whatever will be, will be! Your love shall dwell in me; The tears I held back ~ were copious tears that flowed in my sullen heart. Now my tears I could hold back never more Like unceasing cascading stream~ resolutely rushing on as I stand here~ in front of your tombstone. 18 August 2021 This or That Vol 5 Poetry Contest Sponsored by Edward Ibeh 4th place A Brian Strand Informel Poetry Contest 1st place

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Date: 3/14/2022 9:27:00 PM
I can so well relate to your feelings ! When pent up feelings find an outlet at last, we get instant relief ! Congratulations Jez on your win !
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Date: 3/14/2022 7:31:00 PM
Finally cried. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/9/2021 4:13:00 PM
Lovely & I can relate!
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Date: 8/25/2021 2:04:00 PM
this one is profoundly touching. A fave for me.
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Date: 8/21/2021 9:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a lovely yet sad story/write. So very hard when a love one pass on. Have a blessed day/weekend with your win...............
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Date: 8/20/2021 8:46:00 AM
Beautifully written, JCB:-) I really enjoyed it. Heartiest congratulations on your fine win in my contest!
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Date: 8/20/2021 8:49:00 AM
Thank you for my placement..Your themes are always inspiring!
Date: 8/20/2021 8:23:00 AM
Congratulations for your win.
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Date: 8/20/2021 8:50:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 8/18/2021 12:05:00 PM
This is so gracious, with heartfelt love. Beautiful tribute to your grandmother.
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Date: 8/20/2021 8:50:00 AM
Thank you Marilene for your kind feedback..

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