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Hold Your Breath

If your breathing - better learn to hold your breath, the waters deep and we're going for a swim, the deep dark cold, it always creeps on back in, to watch me, to smother me, why does it love me, its love is suffocating, doesnt it see its a death trap, the cave is dark and shallow and ready to fall in, the deep dark cold, ready to trap me in its depth, If your breathing - better learn to hold your breath If it enters me, and you cut me, stab me in the heart, ill bleed black, and my blood will just pour out, the oceans deep, and we're going for a swim, the world cant see that we're going in, if your breathing baby - better learn to hold your breath...

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Date: 10/27/2010 4:26:00 PM
This was very good! Thanks for sharing!
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Date: 10/27/2010 2:57:00 PM
Wonderful write my dear....so enjoyed your work
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