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When you are so far away In mind, in life, in feeling, in being So far away, too far to say I am so alone, is anyone seeing What I am? For I cannot Robot When you are so far away Someone should hold your hand But you cannot find a way to ask, because you're numb, and What are you, puppet? Tired So please reach out and take My hand in yours, I am here Please, hold on, for my sake Feel my pain, feel my fear Grab, and don't let go No! *** Meme by Mel Leach Poem by Darren White September 27, 2016

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Date: 9/27/2016 11:37:00 PM
You have a great message here, Darren. Linda
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Darren White
Date: 9/28/2016 2:14:00 AM
Thank you, Linda :)
Date: 9/27/2016 8:08:00 AM
Very nice ...
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Darren White
Date: 9/27/2016 8:11:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 9/27/2016 3:28:00 AM
Great string of verses Darren i especially like the final stanza ...I had to google 'meme' lol (I have a lot to learn lol):-) hugs Jan xx
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Darren White
Date: 9/27/2016 3:30:00 AM
Hahaha, yeah, meme. Mel is my friend, she creates many memes I wrap my words around, she is a sort of muse for me :)

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