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Hold On Tight

Barbara Gorelick Avatar Barbara Gorelick - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail Go to Poets Blog Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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Hold On Tight

A gansta guy wearing his pants way low Kept his hands on his crotch and walked real slow Lost his grip Down they slipped Of junk in his trunk ,not much of a show

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  1. Date: 7/22/2013 9:33:00 AM
    You have such a winner here!! LMAO !!! Kuddos Barb !!!

  1. Date: 7/22/2013 6:13:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win! Cheers, Roy

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 4:12:00 PM
    So true. congrats on this very funny winner! Russell

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 12:03:00 PM
    Gr8 write, gr8 win çause had a gr8 laugh

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 6:17:00 AM
    congrats on a great win Barbara

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 2:47:00 AM
    Bg Fantastic congrats on win Shadow x smiles (7)

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 1:51:00 AM
    lol... Congrats, Barbara. Love, Su

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 1:21:00 AM
    hahaha, What did I tell you? I knew Heather would love this one,. and congratulations.

  1. Date: 7/20/2013 11:17:00 PM
    Congrats on your winning place!!! Had a good chuckle! Very good write! hugs!

  1. Date: 7/20/2013 8:59:00 PM
    Barbara, this is very clever. Love the funny images of the 'gangsta' Congratulations on your win :)

  1. Date: 7/20/2013 8:12:00 PM
    A good one. Congratulations! with the smiles. LUV ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 7/20/2013 7:43:00 PM
    Go for it!.......'Send your submission by email to Send the submission in the body of the email, stating what it is (fiction, academia, etc.). Layout of a piece may alter in the body of an email, but if we consider the piece for publication, we will eventually see the your work in correct form. A submission without 'H&H Submission' in the regards box will not be accepted' -We Do Not Open Attachments-

    Ryerson Avatar Tim Ryerson
    Date: 7/20/2013 7:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    They have agreed to publish two of mine...I think they prefer funny, off-beat, quirky stuff...This mag is taylor made for you
  1. Date: 7/20/2013 7:41:00 PM
    My tummy is sore and it's all your fault...

  1. Date: 7/20/2013 7:21:00 PM
    Funny stuff!!! Congrats on your win....Jim

  1. Date: 7/20/2013 7:02:00 PM
    Barbara, this made me guffaw. Seriously. AWESOME job! Congrats on your win in my contest :)

  1. Date: 7/2/2013 5:49:00 PM
    Hmmmm, I didn't even know anyone was watching... This is so embarrassing .... Jake

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 9:52:00 AM
    That was an embarrassing situation for this guy. You have described it well here.

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 8:04:00 AM
    Great! Very funny

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 1:44:00 AM
    hahahahaha. THIS should score BIG with her if it's for Heather. It scores with ME.