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Please answer the question and then ill be through is there a place where we go to make our dreams come true a secret hidden place where we all run away to escape the burdens we face each and every damned day A place where the sun shines and the black clouds go away the place where we make love day after day where the only sound is the birds and the bees flying high up above me as i look out on the sea I can feel it calling in the air tonight just bring it on as you sing this song give a thought to the fallen in every country the ones who have died so that we can survive to kill ourselves with our vices in the morning light can you feel the new day comming to replace the night as the stars turn to dust in the morning light when i look out my window i feel so proud that im a man in this world and i feel alive so alive i cant tell that my time is nigh will be soon that i take my place at my grandads side Please answer the question and then ill be through is there a place where we go to make our dreams come true a secret hidden place where we all run away to escape the burdens we face each and every damned day hold on Matt

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Date: 3/4/2009 11:26:00 AM
a beautiful write and a great question, and the answer is yes there is a place we can all go to escape our burdens of every day, we are not alone God will help us with anything at all, and I love the title hold i=on it'd one of my fave worship songs im my church, and thanks so much for your feed back on my poem walking on air take care from diane
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