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Hold On

(20/07/2011) Hold on, Let me see your scar Is it deep or only a scratch Is it curable or permanently tattooed Your heart’s too clear to be struck Hold on, Let me see your tears Is it salty or only a sweat Is it stoppable or unmendable Your eyes are too bright to leak Hold on, Why don’t you just take my hands Together we can build a dam I’ll lend you my strengths For from now on, I’ll be your lamp

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/12/2011 10:26:00 PM
YOu have a very sweet and interesting style, Dinda. Welcome to soup. I don't recall seeing you before. (If I have, I apologize. My memory is short!)
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Date: 8/12/2011 5:12:00 PM
I love the warm feeling of being hugged throughout this wonderful piece.... great words to compliment the message... luv Michael
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