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Hobo Walking Past Our House

Hobo Walking Past Our House He looked like man walking with rocks in his shoes, a bit edgy, with shadows flitting about. Dark clouds about him, sending the lonesome blues, smiling alligator with a toothless snout. Stopping to look back, time waving its hello's, angry at not having what he left behind; an old man, one of those ***** little fellows with nothing about him speaking as refined. A frown formed upon his dark, withering face, as his ragged, torn hat hung on him quite low. Started again, he walked at a limp pace, leaving questions, answers nobody can know. Disappearing from our sight, one of his goals. Like an ancient furnace, with no burning coals. R.J. Lindley SEPT.22ND 1976 Note: Edited recently to meet the eleven syllable verse uniformly. Syllables Per Line: 11 11 11 11 0 11 11 11 11 0 11 11 11 11 0 11 11 Total # Syllables: 154 Total # Lines: 17 (Including empty lines) Words with (syllables) counted programmatically: Total # Words: 111

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Date: 3/23/2016 7:16:00 AM
Wonderfully written Robert. Probably pondering the questions of the universe, or where his next meal was coming from.
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Date: 3/21/2016 4:55:00 PM
A masterpiece Robert; all the lines are like One great line! Faving this brother! Keith ;-)
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Date: 3/20/2016 3:27:00 AM
great write, Robert! I enjoyed the details describing this man and your ability to draw a picture for me!
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