Hoary

Hoary head mountain Craggy hard gray rock below Melt oh snow soften

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/1/2009 6:31:00 PM

hoary? OK

James Fraser

Date: 10/31/2009 8:44:00 AM

Kool Haiku Sara >> James

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 10/31/2009 5:13:00 AM

Everything in God's good time... And for purposes that we may not know. (Life preserving H2O in icy spots to help fill the aquifer during global warming.) He prepares ahead of time... for everything. I am enjoying your work this morning. Lovingly, Dane

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 10/31/2009 4:30:00 AM

Dear Sara, You tell of such Beauty in YOUR Poetic tapestry I look out my window and see the "Craggy hard gray rock below" do YOU also live on a mountain It's a beautiful view YOUR comments are inspiring Thank-YOU ALWAYS...HG