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we are everywhere within the straw of our relationships to shine a sheen that comes from polishing each others coats what we see are not our individual blades but feel the wind created in the moments of our movements see the field and forest sky through each others eye then within the shelter of our family turn our wheel together in a hive of striving. It is who we are inside this air.

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