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The Queen obvious to all who dare notice, knows no peer. Drones rush in to orbit in frenetic sublimation; workers dutifully push the floor buttons of departure destinations, releasing squadrons of gatherers eager to conquer cubicles of source data. The Queen with mysterious grace, wisely chooses reproduction mates with visionary lineal accomplishment; handheld devices whir complex commands. ......not a word uttered in the elevator. 04/06/16

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Date: 8/6/2016 12:08:00 PM
This is awesome and fantastic. I love it in every way. Lovely, lovely, so lovely.
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D.A Hopkins
Date: 8/11/2016 9:04:00 PM
I have been given the opportunity to make a small message to the human race I ask you for your assistance and time to get serious about the way things were going on with the world. I will be very helpful in getting the best possible rate of interest in this
Date: 6/25/2016 9:34:00 AM
Great thinking the way you did this poem, James. I love the ending.
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Date: 6/10/2016 10:42:00 AM
Love the complexity and depth...gives pause for thought. Very well done!
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Date: 6/5/2016 10:35:00 PM
Very well written; many levels of understanding to explore. Was reminded of the games we plan on our computers--virtual reality I guess. We are all drones or subjects to a degree. Really got me thinking with this one.
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Date: 5/14/2016 11:32:00 AM
James, this is wonderful, I love it 7, in my city there is a rush to save the bees which are disappearing ~
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Date: 5/9/2016 7:22:00 PM
How cool is this! You really had & Have me going in so many different thought directions! Light & Love Jimbo!
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Date: 4/15/2016 8:49:00 PM
What an unusual theme for a poet - a bee hive. I think that it would be nice if all poets were for peace - I don't believe that are - or were always for peace. Keep writing for the "soup" - I know I will. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 4/9/2016 1:30:00 PM
'love the 12th line...great write Pashang.~Abosede.
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Date: 4/7/2016 5:50:00 PM
the final few lines made me smile James:-) hugs Jan xx
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