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Hits and Misses

7/4/16 Got to take care of business From the start to the finish Hits and misses Above below and on the ridges An unbelievable amount are religious And superstitious How much evidence and material lies among the fishes And in some of the harshest conditions? It piques curiosity and is rather suspicious On the road to riches Wishes Shall be fulfilled by determination and wise decisions During the entire expedition You'd better pay attention and listen Especially to what's important, if you want more wisdom Learn from your mistakes, and understand the diffference While still in existence Don't burn your bridges And act malicious Because of your own greed and being way too ambitious Out in the thickets There isn't always crickets (It can be completly quiet and silent, except for the crickets) Always liked the look and scent of eucalyptus And the same could be said for so many things, including hibiscus Bless you this upcoming Christmas Never once and until the end, I can not expect forgiveness Anywhere especially due to different cultures and traditions In my own personal opinion

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