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Hitch 1: Didn'T

'Thanks, man, but I need to get to Jo'burg.' I was nice about it, and I explained it reasonably enough. Town to town might lose me a ride straight back home, I was sure there'd be one today. To tell you the truth, though, even if you'd been going to within a mile of where I lived, I was not getting into your truck. I could only see you but I had seen at least two more, and I didn't even need to look at them, I only needed to look at you. I'd hitched enough rides to know the predators from the prey. I wondered if we'd disappear past some town beyond towns where you might put a bullet in my head, or carve me up in the parched, unruly grass. Worse yet, you might let me live. And I really needed to get to Jo'burg today. 15th August 2018

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Date: 8/21/2018 7:35:00 AM
Off to two!
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 8/22/2018 10:27:00 AM
Okay, I'm glad the first one got you to read the next one.
Date: 8/17/2018 1:44:00 PM
Your style is always so original...and I love it.My mama always said :) ',Dont talk to strangers ' :)..and On that I took her advice So you wouldn t see me asking for a lift.The world isn't a safe place anymore :).Lovely post.
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 8/18/2018 1:51:00 AM
Thanks Charmaine. Truth be told, it was often quite good fun.
Date: 8/17/2018 12:10:00 PM
I hope you've made your way safely my friend. I have thumbed many rides in my younger years. Back then things seemed to be much safer. Nice write, Lawrence... Charlie
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 8/18/2018 1:50:00 AM
Thanks Charles. To be that young again...

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