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Hit Me With Your Best Shot

I was just walking down the street when it hit me a quick jab….followed by a crushing right cross. I staggered….stunned by the suddenness of a seemingly unprovoked attack. Life, fate, Karma…WHAT!!! I covered up, rolled, bobbed left, feinted right, slid along the ropes found the safety of the corner, thanked Ali for the rope-a-dope. I had forgotten the rules of life “Protect yourself at all times”, the bell will ring at sunrise failure to answer the bell will result in disqualification, there is no standing eight count you cannot be saved by the bell, the bell will ring at sunset. The sunrise bell summons me to the center of the ring. I touch gloves with life, with fate, with Karma. The dance begins slowly. Slide smoothly but quickly, stick, jab, counter, cover. To date I have taken on all comers, dealt with their strength, outwitted and outlasted the cunning, outpunched the punchers, outpointed the pure boxers. So I stand, battered, but triumphant in the center of life, hands held high awaiting another sunrise bell. A wily, weathered, champion challenging life, fate, Karma to “HIT ME WITH YOUR BEST SHOT” “FIRE AWAY” John G. Lawless 6/19/2015

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Date: 5/16/2018 12:30:00 PM
KOOO
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Date: 7/7/2015 1:04:00 AM
John, congratulations on your Triple Threat win. Love LINDA
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Date: 7/6/2015 8:38:00 PM
this is awesome... SK
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Date: 7/6/2015 3:05:00 PM
oh just seeing your suggestion for me below. Hmmm. that was a good idea, John!! It would have made for a great collaboration. Anyway, so glad this did well in the contest. Congratulations.
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Date: 7/6/2015 12:07:00 PM
This is a knockout John! congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/6/2015 8:33:00 AM
You are a great story teller! Thank you for entering my contest with this! :)
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Date: 6/22/2015 3:39:00 PM
Amazing writing and how it ended with that reference to the cool rock song. I really enjoyed this one, John. This is one of the contests I have not 'tackled" yet. Should I do Girls just wanna have fun?
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John Lawless
Date: 6/22/2015 4:00:00 PM
Andrea, I think you should conspire with a few of the other "girls" and collaborate on the "Girls Just Wanna Have Fun" theme.
Date: 6/22/2015 9:49:00 AM
You read my Hit Me poem and said "interesting take." So is yours. I love the modern-allegorical approach! Janice (Jancan)
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John Lawless
Date: 6/22/2015 4:04:00 PM
Janice, thanks for stopping by to read and comment. I sometimes us the expression "interesting take" when a poem breaks from the conformity of the usual and leads me somewhere else in thought or into reflection on the multiple meanings hidden in all poems.
Date: 6/19/2015 11:56:00 PM
parry the blows, right on, john... you inspire with this fearless write.. huggs
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John Lawless
Date: 6/22/2015 4:01:00 PM
Nette, I think all poets and writers have lived a similar metaphoric experience.

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