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Hit Me With Your Best Shot

I can write poetry, better than you Yours is not good, what a thing to say! So I said right, hit me with your best shot I can, write poetry, better than you I can write words to help people forget After kind words is this how you repay I, can, write poetry, better than you Yours, is not good, what a thing to say! Penned 19 June 2015 See notes.

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Milton Robertson

Date: 7/1/2015 8:44:00 AM

I'm hear to write poetry I'm not hear to compete, I'm hear to write poetry for wisdom I seek. Now is your's better than mine, I can't say, I'm just hear to write poetry and write it my way. I'm hear to write poetry, I pray world wide it will be read, I'm hear to write poetry, Enough Said... A Lovely Write SEREN.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/25/2015 7:43:00 AM

Yours words are far better than good enough. I see we both made the same choice of words to work from. It is cool how many directions the same words can take us.

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 6/23/2015 7:13:00 PM

Nice Serene. Good luck in the contest! Verlena

Darlene Gifford

Date: 6/20/2015 9:47:00 AM

Hurtful remarks to another poet are unexceptable! Can you report them and move on? Hit back with what is not expected: A forgiving Christian response turns away wrath. Show you can rise above it. And I hope you will not respond in kind. That lowers you to their level. Blessings, ~~~Darlene