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Hit By Love

Love gushed out like a tornado swishing and whirling wrecking heart, mind, soul, a complete CHAOS! It is a new dawn rising from the ruins in bits and parts aiming stability... The thudding heart, and rising pulse the building pressure and flow of desire... Bemused, in this heaven I dwell controlled by feelings that swell unaware of the path ahead Lost in this vortex of emotion. © Nadiya (14 Jan '15) *Won 2nd place on 4 Mar 2015 in the contest 'Beginnings matter' by Richard Lamoureux * Honourable mention in the contest 'Any Poem #31' by Poet Destroyer.

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Skat A

Date: 6/12/2015 9:59:00 PM

enjoy your HM.. thank you..SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/8/2015 12:47:00 PM

Poesy, Congratulations, on your fine win. <3 LINDA <3

Poesy Relish
Date: 3/11/2015 1:56:00 PM

Thank you Linda... glad you liked it.

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 3/7/2015 8:38:00 AM

One can feel the emotions of your poem to the core of the heart. Congratulations for your 2nd Place Placement Poesy!!! ^_^

Poesy Relish
Date: 3/11/2015 1:57:00 PM

Thank you very much Teddy for reading and the comment on my poem... nad!

Skat A

Date: 3/5/2015 11:44:00 PM

Poesy, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Beginnings Matter Win ~SKAT~

Poesy Relish
Date: 3/11/2015 1:57:00 PM

Thank you very much Skat... lov,nad

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/4/2015 7:03:00 PM

Congratulations on this wonderful poem taking winning honors Nadiya. I am so glad I got to read it!

Poesy Relish
Date: 3/11/2015 1:58:00 PM

I am glad that you enjoyed my write dear Connie... be blessed.. nad

Jan Allison

Date: 3/4/2015 2:25:00 PM

wonderful powerful write so full of deep emotion - congrats on your win Nadiya:-) Hugs jan xx

Poesy Relish
Date: 3/11/2015 1:56:00 PM

Thank you dear Jan for you support throughout... hugs,nad

Julia Ward

Date: 2/13/2015 9:50:00 AM

Powerful... Well done, Nadiya. Love, Alicia

Poesy Relish
Date: 2/13/2015 10:22:00 AM

Thank you for your encouraging words Alicia... lov,nad!

Justin Bordner

Date: 2/6/2015 8:37:00 PM

Love has placed a kiss of chaos on your lips of eager innocence Nadiya. I am very fortunate to know the all consuming power of the love strike too! I could not have described its impact and wild beauty any better. "The thudding heart, rising pulse, the building pressure and flow of desire..." Mmmm...your vortex is electrifying Nadiya...J.A.B.

Poesy Relish
Date: 2/6/2015 11:50:00 PM

Thank you Justin... it is a really nice compliment coming from a poet such as you... i enjoyed writing this poem...

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 2/5/2015 2:19:00 AM

From chaos to cosmos isn't it Nad? Even in love. Great. God bless.

Poesy Relish
Date: 2/5/2015 2:39:00 AM

Exactly Rajat... thank you for your support... nad

Jaafar Sadig El Waad

Date: 2/3/2015 9:35:00 AM

it also depends on place and time, Nadiya. I'm from Cameroon and Africa! And you believe me that female voices had been so scarce in literature until the advent of f...

Poesy Relish
Date: 2/3/2015 10:06:00 AM

I did not see it as aggressive my friend... everyone has the freedom of opinion... its been the same in India as well until recently...

Jaafar Sadig El Waad

Date: 2/3/2015 8:42:00 AM

Hi, Nadia! Perusing poems on poetrysoup today I read this one and was hit by the power of words, well-chosen, and the depth of tempestuous feelings. How trilling to read such a descrpition from a barely audible voice (women's! without aiming to hurt anyone, of course) keep up with the good write!!

Jaafar Sadig El Waad
Date: 2/3/2015 9:39:00 AM

Of course, Nadiya! That's why i said I didn't mean to hurt anyone. I said what said and it should not be seeing as agressive. just a mere observation

Poesy Relish
Date: 2/3/2015 9:11:00 AM

Being a graduate in literature, I believe that everyone has the right to express their feelings or emotions irrespective of gender... Thank you for taking time to read my poems and comment... nad!

Skat A

Date: 1/24/2015 6:45:00 AM

Hi Nadiya, a little late with the welcome. NA,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poesy Relish
Date: 1/24/2015 6:59:00 AM

Thank you dear friend for the nice welcome and your best wishes... hav already got to read good writes by some of the poets here... hugs n lov,nad!

Anthony Beesley

Date: 1/23/2015 8:09:00 PM

Desire is definitely a demigod

Poesy Relish
Date: 1/24/2015 12:30:00 AM

Thank u for dropping by Anthony.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 1/17/2015 4:19:00 PM

Excellent piece reflecting the beauty, power, and mystique of love! Bravo, Nadiya. Warmest regards. Pandita

Poesy Relish
Date: 1/17/2015 8:36:00 PM

Thank you for your appreciative comments Pandita... Nad

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/16/2015 12:16:00 AM

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/15/2015 10:41:00 PM

I'm happy you are enjoying this site. thank you for the nice reply

Poesy Relish
Date: 1/15/2015 11:50:00 PM

Yes enjoying very much... Thank you

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/15/2015 3:01:00 AM

- Nadiya, a warm welcome to P- Soup !!! - Love is the only bridge between life and death - Frail as a spider web thread, strong as a rescue rope - Beautiful .... just beautiful !! - hugs // Anne-Lise (Norway)

Poesy Relish
Date: 1/15/2015 6:10:00 AM

Thank you anne for the heartwarming welcome... And well said... Hugs!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/14/2015 9:00:00 PM

Nadiya, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@

Poesy Relish
Date: 1/14/2015 9:25:00 PM

Thank you linda.... I am already getting positive feedbacks and am sure it will help me in writing more poems... please do comment on the negative aspects as well so that i can improve... will check out your contest ... wish you a blessed year ahead... love and hugs