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HISTORY IS OUR STORY Has someone rolled aloud a drum in my chest as I hear the decibel loud: lub-dub so jest crest? Thousand miles apart but such distance is now bridge my long frozen heart taken finally from the fridge I, arrived as planned. His plane too, has land. Already, our contrived vacation has began. Though surrounded by the live world theater, we hugged and smiled, soon as we closed the meters Within the walled city is a hundred years of history, in those cobbled roads we walked --we started our own story Cotton soft clouds watched as blue eyes meet black eyes cheek to cheek is the wind that fans the blushing guy-- for infront of him is the girl he so long to be with. Her smile is as spellbinding as like that of a myth. Old church they view but our hearts search came true, our first meeting drew our probable break through. Two days passed, we went to "where magic begins" park from roller-coaster to merry go round, our chemistry spark We talk like we've known each other a thousand years our thoughts quick to bake a spongy cake so sincere. Day-walks and night-walks: the sun and the stars we outshine for our togetherness' light willed and wine by our God divine! Meals -- a delicious treat but our laughter echo a dessert sweet People who witnessed foretell, our tale is weave without deceit.. Sleeping deep is this volcano lying in the middle of the lake and so we urged our aching past to melt in ten days break. This vacation is filled with so much good memories, so surreal, I dream of this always in my reverie. ______________________________________________________ Sponsor Shadow Hamilton Contest Name Memorable Vacations Placed 2nd... 10:30 pm. April 14, 2015

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Date: 5/9/2015 7:42:00 PM
Olive, Congratulations with your "Memorable Vacation win" Love LINDA
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Date: 5/9/2015 6:51:00 PM
Olive, congratulations in Shadow's contest. Forever SKAT
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Date: 5/8/2015 8:34:00 PM
What beautiful memories, Olive, and how sweetly you present them to us in your lovely poem. Congratulations on your fine win. Sandra
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Date: 5/8/2015 8:12:00 PM
i could have been a secret agent to witness this lovey-dovey, vacay!... congrats eloi, and see you next week?.. huggs
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Date: 11/5/2015 1:48:00 AM
hahaha thanks much Carly... =`) glad you like it!
Date: 5/8/2015 6:17:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Olive:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/5/2015 1:46:00 AM
thank you Jan.. =`) hugs!
Date: 5/8/2015 6:02:00 PM
very enjoyable read Olive congrats on placing hugs
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Date: 5/11/2015 5:25:00 AM
thanks much Shadow.. :)!
Date: 4/16/2015 11:37:00 AM
A prince he is, but only part. It's important to remember "only part". :)
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Date: 4/19/2015 7:16:00 AM
weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee thanks Julia.. :D!
Date: 4/15/2015 1:02:00 PM
Love the title Oliz little one, indeed 'History is our Story, and so much more to be written through the years. As I close my eyes, I'm back there, warm huggles//xx//Dino James xx
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Date: 4/19/2015 7:13:00 AM
:)! thank you HUge James.. :)!!! I can never forget that holiday and will surely want to do it again!!! and possibly not holiday no more but more!!!~olive eloisa
Date: 4/14/2015 4:14:00 PM
your happiness is evident for all to see in this lovely write - may the love story continue for many happy years olive - am looking forward to the next installment! Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Date: 4/16/2015 11:01:00 AM
Thank you sweet Jan for your delightful wishes for us.. :)!!!! oh yes!!! Im looking forward too..warm hugs! :)!!~olive eloisa
Date: 4/14/2015 2:02:00 PM
wonderfully expressed, eloi.. i like how this turned out with such poetic flow and delightful lines.. i wish i can go to tugue; no kasama eh.. you're still there?.. huggs
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Date: 4/15/2015 9:05:00 AM
I'm still here Nette.. :)!!! but soon will be leaving I hope.. :)!!! thanks much I must see you before I go. :)!.//olive eloisa hugs!
Date: 4/14/2015 12:34:00 PM
Your words speak sweetly through the power of poetry, striking a common cord in our hearts that lets your mind set flow onto the page so we can feel the joy and happiness you feel. Emile.
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Date: 4/15/2015 8:28:00 AM
It must be EMile.. :)!! these all I feel while Im writing this.. :)! Thank you for your generous comment.. :)!God bless..~olive eloisa :)!

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