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His Shore Beyond

new dawn upon us light reaches my humble heart lead me to Your Shores .... For Raul's Contest

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/10/2009 4:11:00 PM

Oh this one is a "goodie" Jimbo... I too kept getting kicked off posting comments on both soup site and blog site.. must be on "overload" tonight... blessings.. luv.. "Sweetheart"

Elaine George

Date: 11/26/2009 11:43:00 PM

WOW! Great Haiku, James. best wishes in Raul's contest. Love, lainie

John Freeman

Date: 11/25/2009 8:56:00 PM

Sacred Haiku, James. Good job. Sincerely, Moses

Marty Owens

Date: 11/24/2009 10:02:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku...Enjoyed reading...Good luck in the contest...Marty

James Peranteau

Date: 11/24/2009 5:14:00 PM

This is a great Hiaku Mr. Goff,..I love when they make sence,..as yours do !!! Great write ! james

Moonbee Canady

Date: 11/23/2009 7:04:00 PM

Absolutely Sublime Jimbo ... Absolutely ... MoonBee

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/23/2009 1:43:00 PM

SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Beautifullllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 11/22/2009 9:04:00 PM

Awesome! Jim! Loved this Haiku very much. Nice concept. Good luck on the contest. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your nice comments on my poem, "Awakening Dawn" and a Happy Thanksgiving to you and yours. Love and Blessings, Caroline.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/22/2009 11:29:00 AM

beautiful!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/21/2009 8:19:00 PM

Your faith shines in this write, Jim. Excellent haiku. Best wishes for success in the contest! Love you, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/21/2009 5:40:00 PM

Interesting take on the picture which should do well in the contest. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

P Sheart

Date: 11/21/2009 5:30:00 PM

A awesome Haiku dear Jimbo! Good luck in Raul's contest! Smile. Here's wishing you and yours a wonderful Thanksgiving and Christmas Season too! Love Light Patty

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/21/2009 5:28:00 PM

nicely penned, good luck in the contest!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/21/2009 5:20:00 PM

Expressively beautiful and inspirational haiku from Jimbo like no other can write.. I can see it all now... u are blessed... luv.. thankxxx for your comments on my poetry as always ... encouraging... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"