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His Pacific Blues .....

In his eyes He drove a little far ... Away from the few he knew .... With no rhyme or hue On a black canvas he drew ... His Pacific Blues ..... Darker yet bland were the shades of blur ... Strumming his slur ... fluttering in harmony Over his bleeding lull In his eyes He drove a little too far ... Away from the few he knew ....

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Date: 9/10/2024 9:20:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/21/2016 3:35:00 PM
Wandering Nomad, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/27/2015 3:26:00 PM
W N, a pleasure to read :) hope you are enjoying the holidays ...... SKAT LOVE
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Date: 2/24/2010 9:12:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Wandering. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/23/2010 11:04:00 AM
Well written friend.. Keep em comin'...:JP]
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