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His Last Wish

Draped in twilight's veil that December afternoon was slipping past him; how he wished to pause time once in the twilight of his life. A late waking up; standing on the edge of life with his muffled voice he prayed for a reversal of the time and of his life. Glimpses of childhood, mother's lap as his pillow, colourful days' call, how he wanted all those back just for once, in this twilight. © kash poet ===============000===============

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/22/2012 3:50:00 PM
I see you already have recieved many congratulations for this, Kash, and well deserved, my friend.
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Date: 10/22/2012 11:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D."s "Tanka~sad song" Kash. Love, Carol XXXX
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Date: 10/22/2012 11:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your smashing win Kash xx
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Date: 10/22/2012 10:49:00 AM
congratulations friend Kash! :)
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Date: 10/22/2012 9:03:00 AM
KAsh congrats on your win...great write!!!
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Date: 10/22/2012 7:50:00 AM
Congrats on your win!
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Date: 10/22/2012 7:46:00 AM
Hmmmm sad indeed!
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Date: 10/22/2012 7:19:00 AM
congrats on your win kash :)
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Date: 10/21/2012 4:12:00 PM
CONGRATS KASH ON A MARVELOUS WIN FOR THIS SUPER TANKA ENTRY LUV ..
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Date: 10/21/2012 2:34:00 PM
This is an awesome poem Kash, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 10/21/2012 11:50:00 AM
Kash, congratulations with your to be or not to be tanka poem in my contest... take care of yourself' always~PD
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Date: 2/1/2012 3:32:00 PM
Hello Kash! Congrats on your well deserved win. Best regards, Suresh.
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Date: 1/27/2012 1:17:00 AM
KASH, CONGRATULATIONS with your wonderful win * hugs ;-)~p.d
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Date: 1/25/2012 5:53:00 PM
a Very well deserved win with this awesome poem of yours again, Kash. Big congrats to you.
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Date: 1/24/2012 3:15:00 PM
I just loved the write, the sentiment and seeing you in first place hope you are well and happy! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 1/24/2012 11:29:00 AM
touching, profound, well constructed piece of work....you are such a n accomplished poet.....well done and congratulations......sincerely Syd
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Date: 1/24/2012 9:36:00 AM
Congrats on your superb win for this fantastic write,bl
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Date: 1/23/2012 6:45:00 PM
congrats Kash on a fantastico first place win with this brilliant beauty my friend.. luv..
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Date: 1/23/2012 3:59:00 PM
This is how ya do it! Great winning piece! Gwendolen
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Date: 1/23/2012 2:30:00 PM
Ahhhhh...this is so sweet !! Congratulations on your win !!
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Date: 1/23/2012 2:18:00 PM
Beautiful of memories and regrets. Congratulations! Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 1/23/2012 2:19:00 PM
*beautiful read
Date: 1/23/2012 1:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's latest contest Kash. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/13/2012 3:30:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one..Congrats on your win in the contest..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 12/27/2011 7:18:00 PM
This was beautiful, Kash. Congrats on your win. Kim
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Date: 12/24/2011 1:20:00 AM
congrats on your winning 2nd place kash. the melancholy simply moving here
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