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His Gun Is Loaded

his gun is loaded -
     
 back home on his Facebook page . . . 

                    their numerous taunts


For the A "Gun"-o-ku Poetry Contest of Gwendolen R

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Skat A

Date: 5/16/2015 11:30:00 AM

epic* Forever ~SKAT~

Kash Poet

Date: 3/23/2013 7:33:00 AM

Good Morning! just dropping by to say HI!!

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/15/2013 5:10:00 PM

Wow this really hits you hard! U always expect they are just messing around trying to gain some attention, but what if that person isn't kidding around? Deep, dark and dreary this one is. Great haiku Andrea! Well deserved win :)

Hidden Sister

Date: 2/27/2013 9:31:00 PM

Good job! Congrats

Robert Heemstra

Date: 2/27/2013 1:57:00 PM

Congrats on your Gun-ku win. I enjoyed your poem. Thanks for your comment on my haiku as well. I hope to be back online tomorrow.

Joseph May

Date: 2/26/2013 6:20:00 PM

congrats on your win Andrea..

Painted Hunter

Date: 2/26/2013 1:44:00 PM

Coming back to say Congrats!

Kash Poet

Date: 2/26/2013 10:30:00 AM

Congratulations Andrea on your win!Loved this one on my first read.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/26/2013 10:16:00 AM

hiya, need I say more except thanks for going beck to my first poem lol xx

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/26/2013 9:35:00 AM

Thanks for sharing your thoughts, an interesting 3 point attack. congrad's Light & Love

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 2/26/2013 6:10:00 AM

Lovely write my friend Andrea. Congratulations on your win not only this great haiku of yours but all your great poems..I love reading it all... Cheers!! :) thanks also for all your comments on my poems its all highly appreciated. big hug from me to you. Maria (^_^)

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 2/26/2013 3:58:00 AM

Andrea a powerful write. Congratulation. Connie

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/25/2013 11:32:00 PM

Careless words cannot be taken back and neither can bullets. Great win, Andrea. Love, Joyce

Tahera Mannan

Date: 2/25/2013 11:04:00 PM

Many congrats Andrea for this well deserved win

Ray Dillard

Date: 2/25/2013 9:06:00 PM

Congratulation on your placing in the contest with this moving entry. I enjoy your work! RAY

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/25/2013 9:02:00 PM

Andrea, Congratulations with your winning poem in Rix's "A "Gun"-o-ku " contest. Goodnight~ LINDA

Gwendolen Song

Date: 2/25/2013 8:09:00 PM

Andrea Andrea! Hey this is awesome as it relates to what's really going on in our culture. Evil seems to always catch up with technology too...I can just envision this scary scenario you've painted. I believe your entry was unique as it related to the internet issues...luv, gwendolen

Painted Hunter

Date: 2/19/2013 1:49:00 PM

Catching up on some of yours...I missed so many while I was away. Clever one here...

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 2/4/2013 6:58:00 PM

Cyber space and we get lots of taunts happening there. nicely done. love phyl

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/25/2013 9:25:00 AM

I think David said well with which I agree too. This is one of the problems of modern human world. Thanks for your kind visit to my write. Loved always, my friend, bl

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/21/2013 2:47:00 PM

I like that you chose to incorporate Facebook in your entry, Andrea...so relevant to the case of cyber bullying..I'm sure this will be in the Winners' circle. Love, Annalise

Robert Johnson

Date: 1/20/2013 1:58:00 PM

As people buy more weapons. :( Let us pray.

Frank Polgar

Date: 1/20/2013 12:33:00 PM

An interesting topic for a poem, but a relevant topic for today. Good luck in the contest!

Rachel Kovacs

Date: 1/20/2013 12:02:00 PM

I think that you touch on an important problem in society. With the increase in social media, people are losing the ability to communicate and problem solve without violence. It is important for everyone to remember that most communication is non-verbal. We are losing those skills.

Daver Austin

Date: 1/20/2013 10:05:00 AM

I wouldn't have a gun - hate guns, but love you and your Haiku. daver

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