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His Forgotten Valentine

There's a promise that he made, As he kissed me in the hallway. My cheeks were a reddish shade, As he promised to forever stay. My heart I have given to him; I expected to have his in return. As the lights around went dim, My love had crash and burn. In facebook I saw his latest post With a picture of his newest girl. It says there, "I love her the most, And she is 'My Valentine Girl'." I wasn't sure how I should feel We were over for many years. Seeing that, my world stood still And I remembered all my tears. I have offered him my forever, Yet he still left me all alone. To forget my love, will I ever? 'Coz this pain runs to the bone. His promise that's been broken Is buried deep within my heart. His kisses had left me shaken, I was not prepared to be apart. I was supposed to be the one That he now calls his Valentine. Instead, I turn into this no one; I became his Forgotten Valentine. *For 'The Forgotten Valentine Contest'. *Written February 11, 2013

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Date: 2/12/2013 10:39:00 AM
Belated congratulations on your win Grushen luv xx
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Grushen Guazon
Date: 2/12/2013 10:47:00 AM
Thank you! I never expected it but I'm glad I won. Made me realize I can really make poems. :)
Date: 2/11/2013 9:15:00 PM
Grushen:-) ... Congratulations, with your awesome poem in Debra s "The Forgotten Valentine... " contest... glad to see you on the winning list. Always & Forever* PD
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Grushen Guazon
Date: 2/11/2013 9:37:00 PM
Thank you so much!!! :) I never thought I'd win, Thank you so much!!!! :)
Date: 2/11/2013 6:23:00 PM
So sad but there will be other loves. Congratulations on your win. Love, joyce
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Grushen Guazon
Date: 2/11/2013 9:40:00 PM
Thank you so much!!! :) I couldn't believe I got the 3rd place. I'm so happy. :) Thank you. :)
Date: 2/11/2013 12:49:00 PM
This poem is just so sweet !! Now I know who wrote it. Thank you for entering my first contest on the soup...and Congratulations on your 3rd place win !!
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Grushen Guazon
Date: 2/11/2013 9:43:00 PM
Thank you so much!!! Although I don't know much about poems aside from free verse, thank you very much for liking it and picking me for third place. It means so much to me. Thank you so much!

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