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His Final Letter

I now lie here alone, the wounded have joined the dead Hours pass like years, my body, in shrapnel torn shreds My duty, my love for my country, I can no longer give Memories knowing I have lived, are now starting to sieve Being so far away from my family, so far away from my home Daylight like my life, allures me to a darkening roam To my love I write this letter, my wife my lovely Serena My words are all I have left, in this war torn theatre arena Remember when I moved in next door, you were first to say hello And the day when you asked me out, I was too scared to go I know we were only eleven but something clicked that day Into our teens we grew knowing I'd marry you one day The day of our wedding, was the happiest day of my life For knowing my heart was true, when I asked you to be my wife Thank you for being who you are, and what you made me to be Never wanting me to enlist, to protect the land of the free I'm seeing places of our past, the greens, our courting grounds You playing with your lovely blonde hair, twirling it around Serena, my love, my friend, thank you for being my wife Tell our kids I love them dearly, thank you for being in my life I'm growing ever weaker, as I write through redded stains The darkening roam allures me, the light now starts to drain ~*~ Inspired by an image created by Serena Dunaway ~*~ http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/loss-6.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/25/2014 6:24:00 PM
thank you for the comment on my comment . PD
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Date: 9/25/2014 10:44:00 AM
Magnificent write James n so is the win ! Big congrats!
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James Fraser
Date: 9/25/2014 4:19:00 PM
I can't thank you enough for your always kind words Upma on my poetry, James :)
Date: 9/23/2014 10:00:00 PM
Great write James congratulations on your win. I am going to fav this one. Thank you.
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James Fraser
Date: 9/25/2014 3:51:00 PM
Hiya Maurice, thanks kindly for all your kind comments, James :)
Date: 9/23/2014 3:46:00 PM
very touching write james many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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James Fraser
Date: 9/25/2014 3:28:00 PM
Thank you Jan, very much appreciated, James.....
Date: 9/23/2014 7:55:00 AM
Very YOU, unique haunting great wrap up last line too! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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James Fraser
Date: 9/25/2014 2:36:00 PM
Hiya Headmistress, I trust you had a lovely birthday. Thank you kindly for the plaudits, always appreciated from a classy clever poetess, James :)
Date: 9/23/2014 6:13:00 AM
Oh, glad to the poem by the highlander, Hi James, congrats on the win.
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James Fraser
Date: 9/25/2014 2:23:00 PM
Hiya Dr. Ram. Once again many thanks for your always continuing support. This Highlander appreciates it very much indeed, James :)
Date: 9/23/2014 4:24:00 AM
Touching tragic write.... Yet speaks of so much love.... Congratulations Buddy James..:)!
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James Fraser
Date: 9/25/2014 2:11:00 PM
Thank you Buddy Olive, glad you liked it. Now that Winter is nearing, it's time to get writing again, smiles 4 ya :)
Date: 9/23/2014 12:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this heartbreaking poem James. Sadly families must receive such letters.
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James Fraser
Date: 9/25/2014 2:00:00 PM
That's the tragedy of War Brenda :(
Date: 9/22/2014 9:53:00 PM
congrats on your win in PD's contest, very sad entry indeed
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James Fraser
Date: 9/25/2014 1:43:00 PM
Thanks kindly Francine. I'm smiling seeing your here, James :)
Date: 9/22/2014 9:26:00 PM
James, Congratulations, :) enjoy your win, and stop by my latest blog "We Will Never Know" if you have time, or if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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James Fraser
Date: 9/25/2014 1:41:00 PM
Thank you once again Linda for honouring my poem, James xx
Date: 4/7/2011 1:00:00 PM
beautiful piece of poetry, heart touching. thank you for reading Foxes chasing dreams and for your comment
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Date: 3/30/2011 10:10:00 AM
Wow, great write, james. It touched my heart, it reminds me of my own mom...
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Date: 3/14/2011 4:45:00 PM
Fantastical write Sir ! This reminds me so much of my son stationed in Kuwait. Picture perfect James ! much love, james
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Date: 3/13/2011 4:09:00 PM
I'm not familiar with Serena Dunaway, James, but this soldier's sad letter to his wife touched my heart. I bet many such letters have been written. There is a song from the musical 1776 about a man dying on the battlefield and this poem made me think of that incredible moment in the play when all the frivolity ends and instead of the hall in Philadelphia, suddenly the audience is taken to the scene of battle. The song is "Mama, Look Sharp." It's on utube and it's a tearjerker. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/13/2011 11:27:00 AM
oh james, such a powerful, somber mood yet deeply divine.. wonderful word usages here that defined the whole theme with grace! :) huggs, nette
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