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His Favorite Amongst Flowers

His favorite amongst flowers The pale pink running rose This quiet still morn in wee hours Take Rose note__he will compose Thinking of her as he writes love How he ardors her petals So soft to touch his cheek__ write of Perfume on mind settle Just to touch and inhale_beauty Her beauty at day break To steal kiss wonderful fruity Under rose trellis_quiver_ shake His favorite amongst flowers Rose that gives scented showers

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Duncan Chappell

Date: 10/29/2010 2:03:00 AM

a wonderful peace here Sara thank you once again duncan

Mike Butler

Date: 10/7/2010 4:12:00 PM

A lovely sonnet, Sara. "Just to touch and inhale beauty" a very soft, visual and romantic line. Enjoyed very much. Take care -Mike

James Gibbons

Date: 10/6/2010 7:16:00 AM

Oh, Sara please excuse me, of course your work is a sonnet; I'm absolutely nuts about sonnets so thanks so very much for this wonderful sonnet. Jim Gibbons

James Gibbons

Date: 10/6/2010 7:12:00 AM

There's a sweet lilt to the verses, and the rhyming sets the poem in a special way. And thank you for your kind remarks re "Come Dance with Me" Thanks Jim Gibbons

Kevin Semeniuk

Date: 10/4/2010 8:28:00 PM

this is a beautiful poem with some great images!

Jay Del Fierro

Date: 10/4/2010 12:57:00 PM

and such a lovely choice it is...the rose.....nice , jay

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/4/2010 10:38:00 AM

From what I am reading this morning it looks as if everyone found some inspiration to write this weekend. Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us today Sara. Love, Carol

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/4/2010 5:01:00 AM

enjoyed reading today!!

Gert W. Knop

Date: 10/4/2010 4:08:00 AM

Enjoyed your flowery, lovely and expressive Sonnett today, Sara! Thank you for posting on Soup. Anf thank you for commenting "Summer like it once was". Have a nice week!...Gert

Jayne Eggins

Date: 10/4/2010 3:32:00 AM

LMAO .... just read your message had to sign in and let you know its Ann that was seventy not I ... pmsl it explained James wishing me happy birthday as well ... I am 41 lol not quite 70 yet hahaha love and hugs smile Jayne

Jayne Eggins

Date: 10/4/2010 3:32:00 AM

p.s thanks for the comment lol smile

Joe Maverick

Date: 10/3/2010 11:47:00 PM

sara just read this, its good inspiration for me today.

Jayne Eggins

Date: 10/3/2010 9:17:00 PM

Dear Sara ... lovely sonnet ... thanks for the kind comment on my poem it is appreciated ... love always Jayne x