His Cup Bubbles Over

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Inspired by Pigeon Tart's senryu, 'Effervescence,' posted July 22, 2020...

Effervescence Ephemerality's Essence

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/23/2020 5:41:00 PM

Over my head. On my way to a dictionary.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/24/2020 5:50:00 PM

I'll lend you my dictionary. How do you think I came up with this one. (I don't play Scrabble anymore. Chutes and Ladders wears me out. lol). Good luck!

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 7/22/2020 6:52:00 PM

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/24/2020 5:51:00 PM

Wisdom's overrated, as the dentists all maintain these days --- TOORS (Tooth Removal Service)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/23/2020 6:23:00 AM

You are a phonetic yz guy ;)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/22/2020 7:18:00 PM

yz!..