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His Canvas He Tickled

God dipped His paintbrush in tangerine light, painted streaks of blushes into the night Silhouettes of trees for that added breeze, some with leaves unfurling, awake from freeze Added some contrast, skies above went dim He looked at His opus and then said, "Hmm..." "Something's still missing", and then He chuckled... Three birds: a Smile; His canvas He tickled ** July 11, 2010 written for Carolyn's Heaven Sent Smiles ^_^

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Date: 7/12/2010 11:21:00 AM
Congratulations Nikko on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "Heaven Sent Smiles". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/12/2010 10:19:00 AM
Nikko, many congratulations on your win in Carolyn's fine contest with this lovely poem >> James
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Date: 7/12/2010 9:17:00 AM
Great write Nikko! Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C
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Date: 7/12/2010 8:42:00 AM
Excellent write that should do well in the contest...Oh!That's right it has already been judged...I guess I need to look and see who won...Great work ..Sara
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Date: 7/11/2010 9:19:00 PM
Congrats on the win, Nikko.
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Date: 7/11/2010 5:05:00 PM
Awesome win, my friend. WAY to go! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 7/11/2010 3:44:00 PM
Very creative. I never would have guessed that He would ever tickle the sky, that's my favorite part. Great poem and great job in the contest. Love Destiny
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Date: 7/11/2010 3:25:00 PM
Congratulations, Nikko on your poem's success. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/11/2010 3:09:00 PM
I like this very much. great job. Glad you won. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/11/2010 1:12:00 PM
lo,,i love ths one and the ending comes with smiles,,..by the way i posted my new poem,,later,..p.d.
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Date: 7/11/2010 1:07:00 PM
Now this did make me smile- HUGELY! Wonderful... congrats on your win. You really did something amazing here with this poem.
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Date: 7/11/2010 12:10:00 PM
This one really made me smile Nikko, congratulations on your win ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 7/11/2010 11:53:00 AM
Very creative and a delight to read, Nikko. Congratulations on your placement in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/11/2010 10:52:00 AM
I hope the birds were gulls. I am passionately fond of gulls. And a smile for Carolyn, a smile for Nikko. I am also passionately fond of Cezanne. Super write. Love, Dave
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Date: 7/11/2010 10:46:00 AM
Awesome and unique imagery, Nikko!! Wish you best of luck in Carolyn's contest...Gert:) Lamang kumain ng ilang tsokolate!
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Date: 7/11/2010 10:25:00 AM
REally cool one, Nikko especially the tickled line. HEy, you said you sent me Soup, but I have been in my soupmail and there is nothing from you there! What do you think happened? Are you sure it got sent? Maybe you meant email? Luv,Andrea
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Date: 7/11/2010 5:56:00 AM
A unique interpretation of the picture. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 7/11/2010 12:32:00 AM
Awesome entry Nikko, He sure is masterful, even today, best of luck :)
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Date: 7/10/2010 7:42:00 PM
Great words in your couplet Nikko and good luck in the contest with the depiction of the awesome photo.. thankxxx for your especially wonderful words and uplifting spirit and thoughts.. have fulfilled your request my sweet friend... with luv..
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Date: 7/10/2010 5:58:00 PM
Ahhh......and he tickled those of us who saw his work completed. Love this, Nikko!! (it also made me smile!) ~ love, Carrie
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Date: 7/10/2010 5:43:00 PM
A heavenly beautiful write,, this one I enjoyed reading,, good luck on the contest...P.D.
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