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This enlisted soul At eighteen years old Barely a man Not even street wise told From the proms, to the camp He kits out tomorrow His future he stamps Never knowing bloodied sorrow In just under a year He's older and wiser To a theatre so different Says his military adviser Overseas he heads Thoughts of back home What goes through his mind In eighteen years old roam Where could he have been In so short a time Colouring books Making joining words rhyme As he looks to his background What does he see An eagle soaring In the land of the free The statue of liberty And the bill of rights With the thirteen stripes And the stars to delight He is just a boy In grown up clothes Another one lost To a cause we will loathe http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/war-4.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/22/2009 10:29:00 AM
So young and so many going away for the wrong reasons. You have done an excellent write here revealing the way it is in life. Sara
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Date: 10/22/2009 8:17:00 AM
Another good write,James. Thank you for continuing to bring to our attention this problem of our "children" having to go to war. I can not believe that children are being sacrificed daily to keep the peace in this world!! What is the UN doing? The organization needs to be re-evaluated and re-structured. There's more rhetoric and partying than anything else! It is not fulfilling its purpose!!! I am sorry, James. I get so upset about this!
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Date: 10/22/2009 8:14:00 AM
ok i can tear up a little. and patriotic and proud i do feel. but cheated is the word that comes to mind for our young men. the best ones they go and leave the cowardly trash behind. but the cause out weighs the greed in Gods eyes. God bless our boys and girls. jhl
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Date: 10/22/2009 7:44:00 AM
A wonderful description of the youth that pay the price, for a cause that we loathe! What a powerful message! ~ Carrie
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Date: 10/22/2009 6:14:00 AM
I love this poem James I will add it to my favourites. Thanks for your many comments. Pam.
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Date: 10/22/2009 6:14:00 AM
Very powerful poem, James! We do send our innocent ones off to war and they return to us with the scars incurred while seeing almost unimaginable suffering for the first time. I had a cousin who was lighthearted and loving when he left for war, but returned filled with hate and bitterness. Hopefully, he will make a recovery. I pray for Steve every day. God bless you for shedding light on how this must feel for the young ones who trade coloring books for weapons. Magnificent write! Carolyn
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Date: 10/21/2009 7:14:00 PM
Awesome poem, James! It's one of my favs. We DO loathe the cause. Blessings to the young man.
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