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Another day another fight icy fortress heart dormant in my breast I turn away from him He reaches fingers clinging soulful puppy eyes sorrowful, pleading I'm drawn into his gaze Flash fire ice melting hot rivers of love stream down my cheeks I blink back the tears water o're flows these dam'd eyes.

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Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 3/6/2019 4:22:00 AM

beautifully penned; especially the last stanza

Michael Jordan

Date: 9/26/2008 4:01:00 PM

Trudy - Very emotional poem you have penned - You know in regards to your comment I thank you and my wife and I are so blessed in so many ways - I truly wish that I could somehow express just how much I adore her but after hundreds of attempts through poetry I always feel I have fell far short of what she deserves - I also hope that you are blessed with someone of that nature for you deserve to be loved in that way - God bless